Dessert for Writing

Add spice and imagery to your writing by avoiding worn out modifiers and phrases.When you write an overused image like blue sky consider what else you could use in sound, scent or taste or texture to pique the reader's curiosity and gain attention.

Notice the difference in imagery"

a broken tool          half a pair of scissors


a rusted car            Cadillac dappled with rust

beautiful woman     woman with piano player's fingers

quiet day                even the birds overslept

good friend            tasty as triple chocolate cake


Try these:  summer day, hot morning, wet dress, cheeping bird, frustration, anger, anxiety.

Creative Write:  Where will you go with sensory metaphors today?